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A Day's Splendor
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A Day's Splendor |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 the distinct music of the sparrow at daybreak... the unparalleled shade of purity at dawn... the brisk scent of incomparable moments yet to be... you alone have shown my heart such wonder. the rare silence in noonday’s rush... the tranquil hideaway in the mountain of inundation... the breezy relief in the sun of midday... you have opened my mind to these concepts. the enchantment in the descending sunlight... the matchless inspiration in the tendency thereof... the shimmer of crimson in your discerning eyes... there is no one who could possibly know me like this. the iridescent sparkling of the moonlit waters... the naive dance of the newborn stars... the undivided attention of the protective moon... these miracles have come to be because of your imparting nature. -kh 04/28/01 to be with you... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful work full of well crafted word pictures. Excellent! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Iridescent...one of my favorite words...a lovely read...thank you! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love the vocabulary in this one! Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the iridescent sparkling of the moonlit waters... the naive dance of the newborn stars... the undivided attention of the protective moon... these miracles have come to be because of your imparting nature. ========================== this is such a cool poem Sp... excellent employ and melding of imagery and emotion... the poetic comparisons and the vocabulary made this one... cleverly written and conveyed. (which is a poetic way for saying WAY COOL)  oh.. and groovy too  Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful imagery Snowpants ... such a lovely read with excellent phrasing, just wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
ethome: thank you so much! I am glad you liked this! Sunshine: yes, it is a great word, isn't it?? thanks!!  Kathleen: thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it! JM: you're so kind, m'friend...thank you so much for your always-colorful reply...they're so 'cool'...  but really...I am glad you liked this! I was up around 5 or so this morning (don't ask why, on a Saturday, no less  ) and I watched the sun come up, which inspired this.Kit: thank you so much! I appreciate your kind reply...glad you liked it! sp to be with you... I've tried to hide my passion, but it's just no use... piece by piece I lose it when you walk in the room... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Snowpants, this says so much. You have captured the feeling so well. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sp, you always have a wonderful of way of letting nature speak for you. . . this is no exception. . . wonderful!!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've shared those miracles with us through your incredible poem... for which I thank you. *S* Beautiful imagery... very well written! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh how much there is to see if we have our eyes open. You have the eyes of a true poet. Joyce |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
GS: thank you! I appreciate your compliments! Sven: thanks! yes, nature pretty much says it all sometimes! glad you enjoyed! suthern: oh, my friend...no need to thank me! nature has given me endless writing possibilities...it is my pleasure to share! I am glad you liked this! Joyce: why, thank you, m'friend...that, indeed, is a huge compliment! I truly appreciate your reply! glad you liked! sp to be with you... |
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