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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-04-18 08:03 AM


What is Real

Ripples prance upon the sea
Dance as far as I can see
Shaping crystal colored hews
Mostly greens and lovely blues

And I am lost in embrace
Like wine and Chantilly lace
Thinking dreams of fantasy
Held in spells of ecstasy.

As birds skim lightly in flight
Underneath an azure light
Sooths me like an infant child
Lullabies of warm and mild.

I am lost within this spell
Salty sea and briny smell.
Purged in lonely solitude
Lost to rude and amplitude.

As real to me as real can be
As real to me as being free


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-18 08:16 AM


and free is all I ask to be...
to read, enjoy, thy poetry....

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2001-04-18 09:17 AM


Ripples prance upon the sea
Dance as far as I can see
Shaping crystal colored hews
Mostly greens and lovely blues

And I am lost in embrace
Like wine and Chantilly lace
Thinking dreams of fantasy
Held in spells of ecstasy.

As birds skim lightly in flight
Underneath an azure light
Sooths me like an infant child
Lullabies of warm and mild.
================================

once again I live vicariously thru your rhymes divine of imagery and grace.
thank you for the walk on the beach  
*ww*   me






I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-18-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-04-18 03:04 PM


Sunshine,
Thank you dear. *L*

JM,
For you, I have one thing to say
How did, you ever get that way?
Love Ya Stinky

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