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0 posted 2001-04-16 08:37 PM



Breadcrumb Senryu

like sprinkled breadcrumbs
senryus that feed my heart
joining creatures all

so I string soft words
to hang such from stars, to catch
dreams that might arise

reflect then with me
we who watch the star’s pure shine
we gaze, not alone

sing sweet senryus
wrap your words in soft haiku
dot breadcrumbs, lightly

draw the beasts along
that they may feed from our palm
sharing in our dreams



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1 posted 2001-04-16 08:40 PM


Karilea~
THIS IS WONDERFUL ! ! ! !
~*Marge*~

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Alan
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2 posted 2001-04-16 09:44 PM


This is beautiful, I might have to try one sometime....
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