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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-04-14 04:00 PM


“FEELS LIKE IT’S RAINING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
For some reason, my nose has been running,
so I use a tissue,
and it seems to be all right…
Perhaps I have some allergies, that bother me,
but then why does it want to run,
all night…

My face is wet too, not sure about that either,
I get my towel once again,
and wipe it all dry…
But this also goes on, throughout the night,
and it wakes me so many times,
I wonder why…

I hear these funny noises too, don’t know what they are,
they sound like soft sighs,
or something that sounds like that…
Don’t know what it’s all about, never felt like this before,
maybe I’m starting to become ill,
with a fever that I drat…

So, I have a runny nose, with this wet face of mine,
but I didn’t notice my heart,
which is filled with all of this aching…
Perhaps it’s why I’m so darn cold, and alone in the dark,
I wish someone would come near, and tell me why,
it “Feels Like It’s Raining”…
~~~~


© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-14 04:10 PM


Well I am coming near to tell you these definitely are not hot flashes, and so my advise is to get your bootie to the doctor.  I hope this is just a poem Bill, take care.
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2 posted 2001-04-14 05:04 PM


if only I could Bill. . .

this is excellent. . .

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Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-04-14 05:33 PM


when did you get into my house?   This is special...thank you for this one.
inot2B
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4 posted 2001-04-14 06:32 PM


Symptoms: runny nose; sweating; cold; hallucination  
Mr Charles you are sick. Now take two asprins drink plenty of fluids (no alcohol) and get in bed. If after a few days you are not better go to the doctor.
Forgot to add if you see a BUNNY hopping around tomorrow don't get worried. It's Easter, you are not having severe hallucinations!!!!!

[This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 04-14-2001).]

Taffetta
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5 posted 2001-04-15 12:38 PM


Bill

This is not your imagination - it is from a lonely heart and crying in your sleep.  This is what I read out of your writings.  I could be wrong, but if you have a cold or allergies, then there are over the counter pills to help your condition.  If you are crying within your heart, then maybe a new start on life would be your answer and put your past behind you.  There is so much to live for and there are so many people out there who are looking for love.  Take care - many hugsssss!

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