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Auguste
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0 posted 2001-04-11 01:04 AM


My Friend, Martie

by Michael


Timidly,
I held my hand out
to you
in friendship.

You welcomed me
like someone
you'd always known.

With you kindness
and
lack of pretense,
I immediately felt
comfortable.

I had read your poetry
filled
with the imagery
of
sunny days,
Pacific shores,
children laughing
and
found in you
a
kind a gentle spirit,
moving.

There's a sweetness,
almost childlike in its innocence,
that is a part of you.

So accepting you were
of
my many faults
and foolishness.

It didn't seem to matter.

My friendship,
this hand
that you could touch,
was all
that was important.

Thank you, sweet friend. (((you)))

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2001-04-11 01:18 AM



Auguste-
  This is wonderful...
  A beautiful tribute for
  a beautiful person...

  hugs,
  ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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2 posted 2001-04-11 01:39 AM


quite lovely, great job.  
)

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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3 posted 2001-04-11 02:40 AM


This is quite the tribute.  Well done.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-04-11 07:39 AM


Michael~

'a
kinda gentle spirit,
moving.'


Ah, yes ... to know her is to love her.

A lovely write about a lovely friend within the circle.
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-04-11 09:13 AM


Isn't Martie's magic the best?  This is wonderful Michael...she will be so thrilled!
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6 posted 2001-04-11 09:50 AM


Martie is one of a kind....most definately an angel....this is wonderful!    SEA
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7 posted 2001-04-11 10:34 AM


Michael--Thank you for the tender thoughts in this wonderful poem...and for posting it here for all to see...You are very special!  Hugs!
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8 posted 2001-04-11 05:08 PM


Everyone,

Thank you for your responses to this poem about a sweet poet and friend that is very dear to us all.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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