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Open Poetry #13

More then dreams

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-09 07:33 PM

I long for you
Your kiss
Touch
On many a restless
Lonely
Night
Staring at a million stars
Wandering if you're
Doing the same
Sending my love upon
A falling star
In bleak hope
That I would awake
To find you in my arms
To touch you
Feel your kiss
Make you mine in more
Then just my dreams.

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-09 07:41 PM

Reading my mind, again? Loved this much!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-09 07:45 PM

thank you!

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-09 07:45 PM

Oh this is beautiful! I enjoyed this. I seemed to be doing last night what you just wrote about. Cool poem.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-04-09 08:07 PM

To love in dreams is beautiful, but to love face to face is even better. A beautiful write, Brad.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2001-04-10 09:39 AM

very nice, and yep you word the dreams of many with this piece...sigh

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-04-10 09:42 AM

Right into my heart....and into my library...*SIGH*...

SEA

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

7 posted 2001-04-10 09:47 AM

On target...I know the feeling...great write

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31

Posts 50

8 posted 2001-04-10 01:56 PM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww you're the best. Thank you for this poem. Thanks from my heart. You're the dreamiest.

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

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