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Midnight's Silence
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Midnight's Silence |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Midnight’s Silence with love, RJ Come to me in midnight's silence when the moon mounts the sky pale and full as a new mother's breast and the stars sparkle with the anticipation found in young lover's eyes. Our mouths explore uncharted galaxies as our bodies arms and legs entwined map new constellations. God created the heavens and the earth in six nights and days but we are creating new worlds with each touch designing solar systems with single words soft sighs gentle moans. A nebula forms within me pulsing burning crying for release. My lover hovers over me in space. Seconds flow into minutes minutes into hours yet time stands still as we discover the passion of the cosmos. On the seventh day God rested. Is it sacrilege to say I never want to stop? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WindWarriorRJ~ 'Come to me in midnight's silence when the moon mounts the sky pale and full as a new mother's breast' My goodness ... this is one of the loveliest pieces I shall read this day. Your imagery usage is excellent ! Purely a pleasurable read is mine ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Thank you, Marge. I appreciate your opinions. You are kind! RJ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
A nebula forms within me pulsing burning crying for release. WOW!!!!!! WOW....... Speechless! aloha and hugs x100 Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
The imagery here is fantastic!  Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Windwarrior this is truly outstandingly amazing writing, really excellent work really beautiful. Such a wonderful imagery here. You are a writer of power and style, superb Excellent piece from you Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I have to tell you the truth, it takes a fine piece of work to move me. You poem wrapped me in the arm of a gentle breeze and then blew me away with the imagery. Your style is absoutely fantatic, and I shall definitely make sure I try not to miss any of your work...off to the archives now to see the intimate relationship between you and your muse. Oh did I tell you I lvoed it? Thank you~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful imagery in this...a fantastic write!! Nathan |
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