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Martini
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0 posted 2001-04-12 04:22 PM


The night air was chilly
As it brushed across my bare shoulders
I looked at the stars
So clear, so bright
Mesmerizing
I heard the noise from inside
As the door opened from behind me
I looked at the moon reflect on the lake
So clear, so bright
Mesmerizing
I felt your hand on my shoulder
As I turned to look at you
Deep into your eyes
So clear, so bright
Mesmerizing
Your hand glazed my cheek
As I smiled gently at you
You leaned in and kissed me
Mesmerizing

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost


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Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-04-12 04:35 PM



So Lovely, my Canadian friend!  Yes, that word says it all!~

Take care,
Melissa~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-04-12 05:04 PM


Interesting...James
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3 posted 2001-04-12 05:08 PM


I like this.  Joyce
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-04-12 08:49 PM


Martini~
This is just lovely~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martini
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5 posted 2001-04-13 02:08 AM


Melissa
Thank You so much

James
Interesting??
Well thank you I suppose  

Joyce
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed

Marge
Thank you as well, I'm really glad you like it


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