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Love Me Like This..........
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Love Me Like This.......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Love me…..just love me Hold me tight As moon rounds full Love me in soft light Love me…..just love me In cadence and rhyme With words romantic Still the hands of time Love me …..just love me I want your heat……desire Let us fan the flames Of passionate fire Love me…..just love me with mind , body, and soul ……….emotions free………… without losing control love me…..just love me until at last we must part love me…..just love me with all of your heart. ~SEA~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
SEA, To ask and then to "feel" that love must be wonderful. I hope you get your wish. Lovely poem. ME |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Ahh-- I see those meetings have had an effect....this is more SEA-like..lol--- enjoyed... Jamie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew...you've been a busy girl, all the day.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I really enjoyed this SEA ... I loved the flow and repetition in this lovely piece, very nice!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well ... I'd love to but I think people will talk... and I never knew you felt this way but Im very ... errrr ... ummmm ... ahhhh OH this wasnt for me ???  LOLsorry ... WAAAAY too much raspberry tea today me thinks LOL .... very very nice Sea-girlie ... sensual and sincere ... spicy and nicey and somehow I have a feeling... your gonna disappear for the weekend  Have a good one sweets ... dont do nothing we cant read about on Monday (yeah right) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i like! i like!  hugs, g where am i...WHOA! and what am i doing in this handbasket!?! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes, you got this right. Catching and lovely. Joyce |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, you don't have to ask me twice....but ask me once!!!! PLEASE!!! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"without losing control" ? Gee, I don't know . . . (reps work nicely in this, SEA) Kraw' |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Krawdad said what I wanted to say the repetition worked so well with poem and the message came in loud and clear, great job on this. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
SEA...."love me in cadence and rhyme..." There is much to be said for the writing of love. Bob |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
UN-CONDITIONIALLY... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world 'g.Bernie Slicker |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA I will love you with the rhythm of the tide and crashing of waves Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--What lovely love in this well done poem. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, I have missed your words so very much. I know you know that I love this one, it's a really excellent piece from you. I now have to zoom off again, but thank you for this utterly fabulous girly Take care lave as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - I can say only one thing about your most beautiful writing, if I may. OK!!!!! BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Marvelous ! Ask and ye shall receive !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
SEA, I would most like to echo Kit in my response to this gentle, lovely poem. Well done!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's a poem of love---wow |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah now this is Amore`.....well done Sea, the reps work great in this form. May your love be returned to you 100 fold. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow SEA. . . amazing. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
You are good. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Poetry like this does the hear good. Very good job |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
SEA, The only way to love. This is pretty. Thanks. Michael Proust- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love this! Wonderful! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
OK... I will. I love to nice poetry. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
The message is clear...you said it all lost in thought, found in words. |
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