Helpless ( another cinquain)

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Open Poetry #13

Helpless ( another cinquain)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-03-30 09:06 AM

Helpless
I need your touch
Please hold me close tonight
Whisper love and romance to me
my love

~SEA~

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-30-2001).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-30 09:09 AM

Hey...you're getting ALL the romance...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 03-30-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-03-30 09:15 AM

Sunshine~ ....not till Jon gets home....

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2001-03-30 11:24 AM

I knew
that when i looked
i would find another
soon you will begin to speak in
cinquain

you have it bad my dear....lol

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2001-03-31 11:11 AM

nice to see yourself stretching with new forms

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

5 posted 2001-03-31 11:46 AM

Very tender and romantic!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-31 12:57 PM

whisper. . . whisper. . . whisper. . .

oh. . . you said Jon. . .

. . . does one letter really make that much of a difference??? LOL

this is really good SEA. . . more!!!!

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