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Sven
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0 posted 2001-03-30 12:50 PM


my one wish would be
that I slip into your arms
as I do your dreams

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-30 12:52 PM


oh yes....I like this VERY much Sven    SEA
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2 posted 2001-03-30 12:54 PM


Sven,
Good one I wish you luck.

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3 posted 2001-03-30 01:01 PM


......ahhhhhhhhh.........
trying to give me the slip, eh? lol

loved it... brief and to the point... what's to think about? *grin

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4 posted 2001-03-30 01:19 PM


John,

Loved this!  hope you get your wish.  ;-)

*Laura*

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5 posted 2001-03-30 01:22 PM


Well, that beats the heck out of my vagabond wish! (o: This is pretty, Sven.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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6 posted 2001-03-30 03:41 PM


So much in so little....
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7 posted 2001-03-30 03:43 PM


Now who could refuse a request like this.
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8 posted 2001-03-30 05:33 PM


~sigh~   I'm speechless.     



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

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9 posted 2001-03-30 07:11 PM


Hope it comes true.  Loved this!
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10 posted 2001-03-30 07:49 PM


Sir Sven,

I hope your wish comes true, you always seem to think such wonderful passionate thoughts,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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11 posted 2001-03-30 08:03 PM


A simply sweet wish. Now we need a genie, right? Sven Pen strikes again.  
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12 posted 2001-03-31 12:35 PM


Sven..........you take my breath away with a wish....helen
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13 posted 2001-03-31 01:17 AM


magical pen, so heartfelt...enjoyed...


Lauren ~


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14 posted 2001-03-31 08:43 AM


ah, a man of many talents i see...

this was very nice, Sven

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15 posted 2001-03-31 09:48 AM


Beautiful Sven......beautiful.  May your dream come true.  

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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16 posted 2001-03-31 11:30 AM


into the library this goes...a perfect example of stirring much emotions with honest-to-true words...
Sven
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17 posted 2001-03-31 12:59 PM


thank you all so much for reading. . . and for your words. . . which always mean a lot to me. . .



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