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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-03-24 04:00 PM


White Feather, A Flute, and the Wind


White Feather, slim of limb
holds her Flute toward the Sun
in and out threads the Wind
all listen to your chant

a calling to the bird on wing
a tear to allow the flower's growth
the spirits hold to her keeping
all listen to your chant

White Feather, woman good
handle the flute as you would
let the Wind be your breath
all listen to your chant

Sun may come, Sun may go
but never shall the Wind not blow
hold your flute, lift song on high
all listen to your chant

White Feather, slim of limb
a tear to allow the flower's growth
let the Wind be your breath
all listen to your chant


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-03-24 04:23 PM


WooHoo....
The echoes resound!!!

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-03-24 04:54 PM


White Feather, woman good
handle the flute as you would
let the Wind be your breath
all listen to your chant

Sun may come, Sun may go
but never shall the Wind not blow
hold your flute, lift song on high
all listen to your chant
=================

Oh yes....this is a gift of inspire whispered in the wind to your pen by the spirits and muses of a higher power...
very well done Poetess Sun.
Both White Feather and Sun have been done justice

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-03-24 05:39 PM


Karilea~

Enchantment of the chant
let not your heart deny~
Upon the Spirited wings
of heartfelt response they fly~

Reaching you in this moment
from visions of the past~
Draw the ink into your pen
give them breath to last~

~*Willow White Feather*~
bending with the will
of phrases flowing
from your quill~

*My friend, my friend ...
again, there are Spirits Walking~
Peace and love imparted~

I love ya', gal.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


coyote
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4 posted 2001-03-24 08:19 PM


Sunshine, this brought to mind images of a Sundance Ritual gathering.
Don't know why, it just did?
Feeling the Sun,
Hearing her Flute,
You took me there.
Thanks.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

SEA
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5 posted 2001-03-25 05:33 PM


Sunshine~ this is so visual........beautifully done! SEA
tradewind
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6 posted 2001-03-25 07:17 PM


great images
with carefully
chosen words

i enjoyed the feel
of this one, Sunshine

oh, and thanks for the card!

PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2001-03-26 09:19 AM


I love your nature inspired poems. It really makes me feel....alive.
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