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Paula Finn
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missouri

0 posted 2001-03-22 02:27 AM


Candlelight flickers
Soap bubbles caress your skin
Enchanted evening

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-03-22 03:07 AM


Paula nothing like a good soak...James
Ethan Halo
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on the roof again
2 posted 2001-03-22 03:10 AM


ooooo
sounds like the beginning of a fine romantic eve...
or a fine blockbuster night.

You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass.
- Frank Sinatra

"It don't mean a thing
if it ain't got that swing."

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-03-22 07:05 AM


Aaahh ... a wonderful way to begin an evening Paula. Lovely senryu!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-03-22 08:37 AM


bubbles popping clean
rainbows of colorful orbs
magic in the warm

Paula Finn
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missouri
5 posted 2001-03-22 02:24 PM


James...especially with someone special huh?

Ethan...better than a movie right? Wanna splash heheh?

Kit...thank you sweet lady...Im always honoured when you read

Karilea...you gift me once again...thank you my friend

JLR
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6 posted 2001-03-22 02:30 PM


First rose petals, now bubbles...I'd say you're having a very good day! Loved this.
Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-03-22 02:38 PM


This is very, very nice, Paula.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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8 posted 2001-03-23 04:36 AM


Need to save water,, share that bath.....

Bernie

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Bernie Slicker

Paula Finn
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missouri
9 posted 2001-03-23 02:56 PM


JLR...lol well in my mind anyway...thanks

Kathleen...thank you...Im glad you enjoyed it

Bernie...lol...well just jump on in guy...plenty of room for you

ethome
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10 posted 2001-04-12 06:54 PM


Well now what do you think you're doing in there watching those soap bubbles? Just what are your intentions anyway...eh answer me....Oh! you mean you weren't talking about me.......aw shucks!
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