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Tired of Hoping

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laurie
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0 posted 06-08-2003 09:37 PM       View Profile for laurie   Email laurie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for laurie


Tired of hoping,
tired of yearning
for friends who understand.
Emotionally dead,
so much of the time,
though pain is tearing me apart.
My body grows weaker,
with every day l don't eat,
but all they say,
scorn and disgust in their voices,
is that l'm doing it on purpose,
trying to get attention.
l don't want people to look at me!
Tired of crying,
tired of living,
but unable to stop
the beat of my shattered heart.
lm still alive.
lsn't that enough?!?
l can't eat right now...
l dont know if l ever can.
Can anyone help me?
Does anyone even care,
that l'm losing weight,
and more tired with every day,
and shaking, always always shaking?
Tired of hoping, and tired of trying...
my strength to fight the pain gone,
and lm pushing it away.
Does anyone see?

June 5 03. Thursday
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Chris-
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1 posted 06-09-2003 01:24 AM       View Profile for Chris-   Email Chris-   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris-

god thats awful I know i should say I'm sorry you're feeling that way but i know a few girls that are going through what you are and I know how far sympathy goes but if its anything to you at all I really liked your poem feel better and love
laurie
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2 posted 06-09-2003 01:33 AM       View Profile for laurie   Email laurie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for laurie

thanx... l don't eat mostly because l can't when lm stressed (which is all the tiem) but it helps to make life hurt less, in a twisted kind of way, so... thanx.
l'm glad you like it... laurie.
btw, if u know any girls like htis really well, give them a hug so they know they're not alone? or somtihg? or even guys, to anyone who knows someone whos going through this.... it's more comman than anyonet thinks, and the worst part is beign alone and having everyoen think you're a freak, or worse yet, do it to get attention...
sorry, didn't mean to go off on a tangent here...
laurie.

[This message has been edited by laurie (06-09-2003 01:35 AM).]

Eddie
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3 posted 06-09-2003 03:23 PM       View Profile for Eddie   Email Eddie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eddie

I've been through some very depressing stages in life and that poem helped me realise that these emotions need to be freed, be it in a physical way or through a poem. So I hope you don't mind me saying this but thank u.
laurie
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4 posted 06-09-2003 04:01 PM       View Profile for laurie   Email laurie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for laurie

no... l'm glad you got something good out of it, and sorry you've been depressed. anytime you need to talk, email me... sweeetlover15@yahoo.com.
laurie.
gyiel marlok
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5 posted 06-09-2003 08:27 PM       View Profile for gyiel marlok   Email gyiel marlok   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gyiel marlok

laurie this is amazing
laurie
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6 posted 06-09-2003 11:41 PM       View Profile for laurie   Email laurie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for laurie

thanx, tavis. glad you liked it.
and yeah, it probly is a cry for help, but who cares?
laurie.
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7 posted 06-11-2003 01:16 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Laurie, I really don't know what to say,
except here's a hug from me to you...
         
Ethel
laurie
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8 posted 06-11-2003 07:30 AM       View Profile for laurie   Email laurie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for laurie

thanx, ethel. l guess thats good.
yeah. glad you... got something out of it, l guess.
laurie.
eor
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9 posted 06-15-2003 02:59 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

you have a really, really real way of putting life into words, it is amazing.  i respect that you can just put you emotions on paper then out to the world, that is hard, good write...eor
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10 posted 06-16-2003 10:40 PM       View Profile for mysticpoe   Email mysticpoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mysticpoe

When the playful puppet laughs, others laugh. Are we puppets or are we real? for real people to feel.

mysticpoe
laurie
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11 posted 06-16-2003 11:32 PM       View Profile for laurie   Email laurie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for laurie

thanx, mystic, though it's gonna take me a coupla minutes to think about this one... l just got back from a visitation for my uncle a couple hours ago, an l've got a headache, so l think l'm not thinking too well. anyway, glad you got... something out of it.
l hope l can assume you liked it.
laurie.
spritrider87
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12 posted 04-13-2004 03:16 PM       View Profile for spritrider87   Email spritrider87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spritrider87

this is a really good poem. i hope things get better for you. i wont say im sorry and i wont give you any sympathy because i realize you dont want it. but i do care. i hope you start eating again....yeah... later i guess.

"i am in troble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages then help me.
at the end of the rope taking my last breath "

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