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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-07-10 08:17 PM


homespin spasm
kittyclasm
hairraisin foo
who dare? says you
creeped by feline speak

                       otherworldly freak
                       intruding
                       wrong-exuding
                       enter-
                       dim-
                       unmentionable
                       slide
                       ooze inside?

cattailterror gone
frozen stares at spawn
beware wary-wise
two ears, two eyes
is predators guise     two-legs!
                       got two knees
                       to prey


by H.P. Lovecats

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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brian sites
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1 posted 2002-07-10 08:19 PM


sorry for the repost
I am an idiot with no fingers
who should keep to scribbling in the dark
sorry
sorry
sorry
BSorry

idrift2u
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2 posted 2002-07-10 08:57 PM


Hey, this one sounds like the last one you posted...wait a minute...
Anvrill
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3 posted 2002-07-10 09:46 PM


It's like The Cure meets the ultimate in dark and evil writing! H.P. Lovecats. Though, truth to be told, it sounds a lot like yr talking about my kitten, Halloween. She takes after both her mommies, and is therefore a very very very evil little creature. But that was a given anyway.

Nice read.

"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch.

wranx
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4 posted 2002-07-10 10:36 PM


Huh?

I thought it was all that acid I took in the 60s'

Moderator SPANK!

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

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5 posted 2002-07-11 11:54 AM


Not to worry, a moderator has been notified.

Interesting poem y' got there, BS. Ah lahk it!

the other BS

She said burn ... together.
-TON

brian sites
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6 posted 2002-07-11 10:18 PM


thank you anvrill for the thoughtfull read.
thanks wranx for the spanx!
thanks squirrel for the read and for wiping the sheepish groan off my stupid-dity.
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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7 posted 2004-05-18 04:37 AM


alright, the poem was really funny...then you guys went and made those incredible funny replies....suppose that means im left ROTFL
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