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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2003-02-17 02:59 PM


The February wind blows around me, cold.
Chilling me, beyond the bone.

I love you.
          I miss you.
          I miss you.

I love you.

I remember when the touch of your wind
First warmed my heart.

I miss you.
          I love you.
          I love you.
I miss you.

An ocean wind of love,
Caressing my soul.

I love you.
          I miss you.
          I love you.
I miss you.

Now, I find it has blown elsewhere.
When I really needed it here.

I miss you.
          I love you.
          I miss you.
I love you.

The touch of your wind,
The love of your heart,
To warm my soul.

Touch me again wind,
And I will touch you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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cinnamongirl
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1 posted 2003-02-17 04:23 PM


Aaaaahhh... this is just... incredibly beautiful.  Such aching, such longing... and I feel that wind, whispers of desire and love dancing through its fingers... wow... what magic.

THANK YOU so much... this is just amazing.

Wow.

Love,
Moca

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2 posted 2003-02-19 01:23 AM


Beautiful.  Much loved.
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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3 posted 2003-02-20 01:40 AM


Why is this in Dark? I suppose there are tones of depression and longing in it, but I think it could still fit in Open.



enjoyed, Sweet Poet. I hope your heart is well.

SARCASM BREEDS A BROKEN HEART, and I  have enough cracks. Please stop breaking me!

Moonlight Romeo
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4 posted 2003-02-20 10:14 AM


It is here, my Dear Fellow Moderator, because of just that.  But, as you said, it could also be elsewhere.

Thank you for reading, it is always wonderful to hear from you.  

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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