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alibaster
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In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2002-07-21 12:47 PM



When you rode the moon
upon wings of tissue paper
smiling ever so dapper

I begged for you to return soon.

When you rode the moon
forgetting all that mattered
leaving in your wake, my life, torn and tattered

I screamed for you to return to me soon.

When you rode the moon
and painted all things grey and black
laughing hystarically and never looking back

I longed for your icey touch to carress me soon.

When you rode the moon
downing in your own insanity
and cutting the strands of your morality

I pleaded for you to kill me soon.

When you rode the moon.

I cried

You lied

I died.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

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MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri
1 posted 2002-07-22 01:15 AM


"...When you rode the moon.

I cried

You lied

I died..."

Leaves me in Awe . . .Stunning ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-07-23 05:49 PM


W W.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Sven
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3 posted 2002-07-23 06:49 PM


no one knows the secrets of the moon like you ali. . .

superb. . . just excellent. . .

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