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akira
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0 posted 2002-07-15 12:33 PM



My heart will die

You can look at your life and wonder what the point is and never know
Life doesn’t make sense; we’re constantly confused by it

I’m not sure about anything, or what I want from life
But time used to stand still when I was with you

Lately you don’t seem to care, its like I’m not even there
I’ve fallen for you but you don’t seem to understand
Just how much I need you

You may be able to look at life and not care
Life’s not that simple for me

I’m lost, confused and scared
But you don’t care, your not even worried

So the time has come to say “goodbye”
I’ll walk out that door, and try not to cry
But all the while my heart will die

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira
Aol/Aim name: mjhawaii50
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Email: Akiras_Fire@yahoo.com

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akira
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since 2002-07-13
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1 posted 2002-07-15 12:34 PM


sorry i didnt mean to post this twice...my server screwed up...sorry about that

Akira

Severn
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2 posted 2002-07-15 07:59 AM


No worries akira - all fixed.

and this: 'Life doesn’t make sense; we’re constantly confused by it'

is a true statement, and I wonder - if life did make sense, and we weren't confused - how rich would the tapestry be then? Not very...confusion has it's place...

K


GoddessofHell
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since 2002-07-09
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3 posted 2002-07-15 03:47 PM


Beautiful poem...enjoyed.

Heather

akira
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since 2002-07-13
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4 posted 2002-07-15 05:17 PM


i'm glad you enjoyed my poem....i love to write and it makes me really happy to get responses...

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira
Aol/Aim name: mjhawaii50
Yahoo Messenger name: Akiras_Fire
Email: Akiras_Fire@yahoo.com

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-07-16 11:18 PM


Wonderful.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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