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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-07-10 07:29 AM



Keep me
blind
and perched
on wrist
Starve me
aching
clenching
fist

Hooded
blind
to all things free...

Release.
surprised?
I am set free.

The falcon hated falconry.

© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
devina
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Cali
1 posted 2002-07-10 03:22 PM


No She-Aut...he loved the act of broken evil...

Loved this cage breaking of you sis...

you STILL amaze me...after what? three or so years???

yep...dazzle on sissy...and maybe? later on I'll dance fer ya...

~Tanya


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (07-10-2002 03:23 PM).]

Tiersdin
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east coast
2 posted 2002-07-10 11:08 PM


Cool poem, Serenity!

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-07-10 11:35 PM


A lovely little ditty.

That single word "Surprised" was the kicker in this. For me, anyway

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-07-13 03:02 AM


So fly, then!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-07-13 03:13 AM













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