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my baby...is gone
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my baby...is gone |
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akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
My baby...is gone You don't understand how much I wanted the baby You didn't see how much that child meant to me You said you loved me, but when told you how I felt You didn't listen, you only said to wait You don't know how much it hurts You dont know the pain I feel, because to me that baby was real She was my child, and I didn't get hold her She was my baby, and I lost her to death You said you loved me, yet you don't care You don't realize that baby, was part of you too |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Losing a baby, or having an abortion is very hard. This is very sad but true, so many people don't care about there babies. Good write. LP1 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sending sympathy and hugs. Sandra |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Very sad....Hugs. Heather |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hello, akira. Since you don't have an e-mail address to send through, I wasn't able to explain something: Due to a three-way crosspost of your poem Life's Lessons, I had to erase it from Dark. Other copies still exist in Teen and Open. Please note that Passions in Poetry does not allow members to crosspost. If you want to submit the same poem to more than one forum, please wait for several days, and then explain that the poem is a repost from a different forum when you re-publish it. The reason we can't crosspost is simple: if we all posted one poem in three places, there's three posts -- two more than the server should have to deal with. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me, or to speak to one of the other moderators. Hope y' enjoy yr stay here. Oh, and I liked yr poem.  Mike She said burn ... together. |
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