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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA 
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if you could see through my eyes perhaps but for the single split of a second you'd be amazed the colorful portrait of what i see it's emotional detail the vividness of its attraction and intensity of it's beauty if you could see through my eyes only if in a moment of a chance of glance you'd be transfixed the radience of a wish's purity a likenness to a glowing butterfly clarity unbelievable in a mere snapshot and such an image of overwhelm if you could see through my eyes even as a one-time peripheral vision you'd be forever mine the promise of all i have a guarantee of hope imprinted forever it's value increasing daily with enlargements further detailing my love for you. if you could... [This message has been edited by EveGnosis (06-01-2002 09:35 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful outpouring of love... Wonderfully expressed...and was enjoyed by this reader so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Whoa!!! What, I leave the aspiring poet alone for a few, and when I return, he has posted such as this? From what inspiration? Truly the most impressive piece I've read from you, and welcome back. I knew you'd have to post here again, because this is the best place on the web to show your true emotions... Awesome, my friend. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is really nice, eve...I like it - a lot..  K |
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