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Dark Poetry #3

A Lure Me

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

0 posted 2002-05-27 12:14 PM

Glances of styrofoam precede chapstick puckers of sarcasm
The bait of amusement awaiting a bite from this perch
But unlike fair sport where catch is thrown back
There's no intent to even reel this one in.
One sits at the same table drinking gin and humor
The chuckles and imbibing bobbing as a weight
Eagerly waiting for the plastic ball to sink
As my teeth chomp only to find a hook of triviali-tease

amoretteb
New Member

since 2002-05-27

Posts 2
IN, USA

1 posted 2002-05-27 08:57 PM

very descriptive. I really enjoyed.

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-05-30 11:36 AM

I really liked it very creative.
-Neala

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

3 posted 2002-05-30 08:44 PM

You put your words well... Good write
LadyP1

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

4 posted 2002-05-31 01:13 AM

"...chapstick puckers of sarcasm..." I loved this line! Creative indeed my friend! ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

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