Dark Poetry #3 |
Valentine's is a lie |
Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Yeah so it’s Valentine’s day, And I’m here with you, ‘Right where I belong’ But I wish you would just go away, “Happy Valentine’s day, I love you”, If you say that one more time I might be sick, I hate when you touch me like that, Like I am the only the one who matters, Like you are the only one who matters to me, Well happy Valentine’s Day, you’re not! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
An interesting poem. Perhaps the speaker is taking the affections of his/her lover in the wrong way. On the whole, this was a good piece exposing the less desirable sides of love and romance. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like everyone doesn't enjoy Valentines day...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maybe a very good way to say it's time to move on to a different Valentine? |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
yeah, I can go along with that! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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