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Ginners
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0 posted 2002-02-15 08:58 PM


Yeah so it’s Valentine’s day,
And I’m here with you,
‘Right where I belong’

But I wish you would just go away,
“Happy Valentine’s day, I love you”,
If you say that one more time I might be sick,

I hate when you touch me like that,
Like I am the only the one who matters,
Like you are the only one who matters to me,
Well happy Valentine’s Day, you’re not!


© Copyright 2002 Gin Leigh - All Rights Reserved
fractal007
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1 posted 2002-02-16 12:44 PM


An interesting poem.  Perhaps the speaker is taking the affections of his/her lover in the wrong way.  

On the whole, this was a good piece exposing the less desirable sides of love and romance.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-02-16 01:36 PM


Looks like everyone doesn't enjoy Valentines day...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2002-02-16 01:52 PM


Maybe a very good way to say it's time to move on to a different Valentine?
EagleOne
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4 posted 2002-02-17 12:34 PM


yeah, I can go along with that!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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