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the madness the frustration |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
most of the poems that i write ryme, i don't write like this because it kinda freeks me out. well i hope you like it the madness the frustration that grips and stops time a few words and then overflowing emotions killing and hiding the real personality inside a deep labyrinth of false truths and half lies with an inescapable sense of forsakenness and depression hanging over head baring a constant hidden reminder of the past bring pain and morbid ness horribly mutilating and scaring the inward body and soul bring on pain of no source and no cure finding moments of balance with only physical pain and coming to the conclusion of only one way out living in a world where they think they understand and being pumped full of chemicals that totally hides it all making the feeling of depression intensify but hidden under this mask spending hours in the dark inner mind and with the decision made and keep a twisted path in order with depression becoming a constant relapse adding a new level to the labyrinth every time finding moments of balance with only physical pain and coming to the conclusion of only one way out The madness, The frustration...THE END Thank you for your time |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Don't give up hope. If it weren't for the bad things in life, we would not recognize the good. |
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dimples New Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 7 |
I'm not a person who can interpret poems great and I don't intend to totally understand what someone is trying to say in there poem. I feel when a person shares there poems it's like sharing ones diary and well it's opening yourself to others to see your most inner thoughts. I liked your poem and have written ones similar. I feel that sometimes emotions are needed to be expressed in other ways to help a person live there life. So for a bunch of humble jumble but your poem I feel can have a lot of different meaning to it and anyone can realte in some way to it. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
madness the frustration, the story of my life..lol Well done! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I think a lot of people, myself included, can relate to what you have said sometime or other in their lives. I often wonder whether it is really "depression" or whether it is seeing the world as it really is for the first time that makes us draw back inside ourselves and look for truth. Sometimes the truth we find there can make us long for "the end" but perhaps it is actually a new beginning. |
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