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jennirey
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0 posted 2002-01-27 12:55 PM


Today I let go of the wind
Today I let go of you my friend
Too many sorrows I felt fleeting past
Too many tomorrow’s that I could not grasp.
It passed me by so many times.
Teasing my memories and teasing my mind.
I held it fondly for way to long,
after our splendid storm was gone.

My mind was swirling, around with the leaves
Getting lost with each little breeze.
Now winter is here and as the north winds blow
I have finally found a direction to go.
To hold my anchor firm on the ground.
and Never again get tossed around.

So blow past me the cold cutting  wind,
I say one last goodbye to you my friend
My head held high, as I glance around.
The wind is silent, it makes no sound.
I was a fool to think I could grasp it, you know
Bring on the winter and the new fallen snow.
Im ready for rebirth and Im letting you go


10/2000

Jen


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-01-27 05:06 PM


I believe it's wise to let go...James
qtpieelmo
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2 posted 2002-01-28 12:40 PM


Wow this is so sad, but I have found that sometimes letting go is the b est thing to do! Great expressions here!! ELMO
angel girl
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within a whisper...
3 posted 2002-02-14 12:13 PM


Letting go is hard but sometimes it is necessary. Nice writing.

"What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been."

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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
4 posted 2002-02-14 02:45 AM


If you're letting go, then make sure that is what its supposed to be. enjoyed.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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