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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2001-11-14 01:48 PM



Ghost's of life
Ghost's of death
Haunt me in my dreams
So not to rest
I tried my best to
Fight back, but they
Already had a preplaned
Attack.
So they attacked
And attacked
So not to enjoy these
Toys mortal bound, to
Only grow as let
world round.
So the next day i rested
Without a sound
And now lay in harmony on
Heavenly ground.

not my best but i wrote it a few years ago and figured i would post it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2001-11-22 01:20 AM


just wanted to see if people could understand this one

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-11-22 09:13 PM


I understand it Jeremiah. Pretty strong stuff.Take care.
Sandra

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2001-11-23 03:43 PM


Me?  I'm gonna think on it a bit...and come back.

jwesley

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