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Dark Poetry #3

You Slayed Me

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-21 05:50 PM

Your severe eyes
I still remembered;
You killed me
But it hurted more
Than pain of a sword.
You slayed me
For your son's felicity,
But have you ever thought
I was a son though
I was not born of your womb?
Of all the years
I was blinded by you;
I loved you.
Why was my question;
You judged so unfairly.
Why was my question;
Were you not a stone?

//Inspired by a TV drama I saw. The mother is a second wife of a man. She wanted her child to have good things so she switched her son with the first wife. She hated the son of the other woman all her life cause the other girl was always in her way, in marriage or else.

Lizzy

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2001-11-22 12:16 PM

very good poem. i enjoyed much so you keep writing so i have something to read. i also found the idea great.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2001-11-22 02:19 PM

Thanks. That's very encouraging

Lizzy

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-11-23 03:45 PM

Good write Lizzy.

jwesley

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