The Hole That Can't Be Filled

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JT
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since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

0 posted 2001-11-10 09:08 PM

THE HOLE THAT CAN'T BE FILLED

You filled a hole in my life.
But it wasn't a relationship hole.
And it wasn't a lustful hole.
It was some other special kind of hole.

A deep friendship of some kind.
Partly from the heart but more from the mind.
But I started to play the wrong role.
I tried to fit a square peg into a round hole.

I thought it would be okay.
If we just didn't go all the way.
If we just stayed close and remained good friends forever, that would have been really great.
But you can't knock one out of the park, round the bases, and stop just a few inches from home plate.

Things got out of hand.
It didn't go as planned.
Now I miss you.
And I know it was all my fault anyway.
But I miss you.
If I ran into you now I wouldn't know what to say.
I miss you.
I hope we get together again some day.
If we had to do it again,
I wouldn't do it the same way.

Since you've been out of my life
it feels like part of me's been killed.
Since you've been out of my life
There's a hole that just can't be filled.
But it's not a relationship hole.
And it's not a lustful hole.
It's some other special kind of hole.

JT

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2001-11-11 02:03 AM

Wow, well done.

It shows the consequences of things, and the feelings left behind. There's always someone left behind...

Sincerely,
Titus

"....this time I was mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking." Nickelback

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2001-11-13 02:01 PM

This is a very nice poem and i liked how you show that everything has its consequence...nice job

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

3 posted 2001-11-13 10:27 PM

Titus and shugarhigh,

Thanks very much for your response. A lot of people may not be able to relate to the feelings here, it is a little different, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

JT

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-11-21 02:03 AM

I've noticed that if you leave on good terms people tend to come back around...but don't wait for them...they don't want you to...in my opinion....James

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

5 posted 2001-11-21 11:11 PM

JT, I can indeed relate very well to your words, and enjoy the way you have expressed them

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