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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-22 04:01 PM


An Offer My Honey
Can Not Resist

Shall I do all the work.
It seems you insist.
So let me make you an offer
you can't resist.
I shall become a memory
that will cease to exist.

Go ahead and
make my day.
Honey may I
no longer care
what you say.

Remember no matter
whatever we say or do
honey don't call me
unless I call you.

JamesLee
October22
2001
YesJames
IsMad

© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-10-22 07:17 PM


Poor James.. don't be mad!!!  Purge my friend, purge as you are doing now!  Get it all out, and then recover and fill her space with another type of love......
*hugs*

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2001-10-22 07:51 PM


honey don't call me
                                   unless I call you.

james is mad? *hugs*..PURGE...like she said! good poem buddy- you could feel the anger and bitterness in this. awesome job of telling your emotions too. thanks for sharing james.

                            f  t e
       wave           a     ...r    the emotions crash in the reef of life
                 w    e

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-10-26 07:23 AM


Thank you Isis and cherish...I felt better just writing these feelings out...I need to get my disappointments out into the open...after she apologized profusely she and I went out to lunch at Sizzlers on Wednesday.  I really like her but I don't like to be ignored...James
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