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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2001-09-23 10:19 PM


THE MASK

Concealed behind a mask of laughter,
painted on like a clown.
Sparkling eyes like diamonds,
a smile as bright as the sun.
Not a drop of pain ever shown.
Making others smile & laugh,
though the favor is seldom returned.
I might smile on the outside,
but inside I desperatly ache.
This mask can't hide me forever,
these emotions suppressed,
restraining my tears.
Where can I run?
Where can I hide?
If my mask disappears,
how will I survive?

LOVE ELMO



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-09-23 11:06 PM


I  know this is serious, but my daughter is currently watching Jim Carey in 'The Mask' on TV, so I actually had a smile on my face when I read this. I'll have to read it again another time, because it is a good expression of what masking is all about.
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
2 posted 2001-09-23 11:29 PM


I think we all wear masks at least some of the time. Nice poem

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
3 posted 2001-09-24 02:53 AM


hun
*hugs*  long time no see.  i love this poem.  as you know all to well that i wear that plastic smile as well  *hugs*  where have you been?  i havent heard from or seen ya in sooo long.  and i misses ya    e-mail me.
loves ya
jesse

Feed my brain with your so called standards
Who says that I ain't right
Break away from your common fashion
See through your blurry sight

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2001-09-24 08:40 AM


Thanx midnite--yea I was watchin that movie too when I decided to post this one--lol--Thanx Tracey I definatly agree with that one--& Jesse I miss u too, I know I haven't been here much, I'm a junior in college now, so it keeps me very busy!!But I'll be talkin to ya-- LOVE ELMO

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 09-24-2001).]

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