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Isis
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0 posted 2001-08-18 11:56 PM


When I have given nothing but love,
Support all along the way,
Why did he turn his back?
Suddenly I seemed to fade.

Friendship forgotten,
So many links broken,
Was it something I said?
Or was it what wasn't spoken?

The cause I cannot understand,
The feelings of bewilderment and loss,
Now it seems,
Like no one gives a toss.

So painful when my good isn't good enough,
To be looked on with pity or distain,
To be abandoned and forgotten totally,
I will never view any friendship the same again.

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



© Copyright 2001 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2001-08-19 12:55 PM


Friendship forgotten,
So many links broken,
Was it something I said?
Or was it what wasn't spoken?

Sometimes the not knowing why someone leaves us is the hardest part to deal with.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-08-19 05:07 AM


Isis~
Well .... I 'give a toss' !

Friendship is a difficult thing to tend in another's heart ...

Perhaps that friend will return ...
do not judge future friends by the one that left
the circle of your friendship~
Some stick around for eternity~
They are the ones that truly matter~

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-08-19 05:57 AM


Isis I hope you can work this out with your friend....James
Dee
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4 posted 2001-08-19 11:48 AM


Lisa, some friendships come and go, others stay in your heart for ever. If this friend loves you enough he won't be able to stay away too long.

Take care,
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2001-08-19 01:19 PM


Forgotten and lost
A friendship abandoned at cost,
A cost a caring
A cost of sharing,
No matter what the investment made,
Investment of such in your soul never fade.

Gloom

Isis
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6 posted 2001-08-19 07:10 PM


Thanks my friends.    It hurts when you give your all and somehow it isn't good enough.  I put in a lot of work and time emotionally and physically and it seems I've served my purpose..
As much as you enjoy them or love them sometimes you have to let go.. but the most important thing is.. I will stay true unto myself, for I know I've done nothing wrong...
Thanks for your understanding..
Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



Allysa
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7 posted 2001-08-20 03:34 PM


I know how you feel.
I've been betrayed by a few friends.
I tryed to be their friends, but it didn't work.
Great poem!

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

Sven
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8 posted 2001-08-20 04:00 PM


you will always be my friend. . . no matter what. . .  

and yes, all you can be is you. . . that is all that you ever should be. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress
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9 posted 2001-08-20 07:18 PM


Your thoughts are presented honestly in this. I can understand quiet yet accepting distress. Its nice to see you around.  

Isis
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10 posted 2001-08-21 07:08 PM


A post like this shows you who your friends are huh?  
Thanks my friends  
Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~



kaile
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11 posted 2001-08-22 06:51 AM


i am not going to trivialise your pain by saying that i have gone through the same thing before...i only hope that time helps to diminish the wounds as fast as it can be possibly done...

HUGS

qtpieelmo
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12 posted 2001-08-22 09:13 AM


I like this--I Have found that the unspoken hurts much more than the spoken most of the time--LOVE ELMO  
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