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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2001-08-20 09:21 PM



words spoken
never heard
like the song
of a flightless bird
never quite understood
yearning for a better a better place
there's your exit
leave without a trace
scared and alone
no where to call home
finding solace in anothe hit
if this is hell you've found the pit
running throuhg a maze of mirrors
each reflecting one of your terrors
believeing in a childish dream
life unraveling at the seam
beginning at the ending
twisted lies, mind bending
awakening from the darkness
clouds clearing away
you hide now from
the light of day....

Julie :)



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1 posted 2001-08-21 06:23 PM


this does convey a certain hopeless circling...with no ending in sight...

I was not quite certain about

words spoken
never heard
like the song
of a flightless bird

it flows..but flightless birds do sing of sorts...


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