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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-08-13 02:11 PM


Wrap my soul around your pinkey finger,
I assure you that you know how.
I'm more then just a fallen angel,
more than just forgotten.
Hold me far, don't let me linger,
for just one more moment on your lips,
would bring me closer to you,
more than just forgotten.
Use me when you want me,
then let me free to soar,
to explore what it's like to be
more than just forgotten.
Let me linger just a little while,
let me touch your lips once more,
let me know what it's like to be
more than just forgotten.
I am hidden in your shadow,
unfound by only the sun,
i am hidden when you look at me,
I'm more than just forgotten.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself.  That's what I live by.

© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-08-13 11:22 PM


This brought tears to my eyez becuz I'm feeling forgotten tonite   Great work LOVE ELMO <3
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-08-14 01:55 PM


Very good title to this piece.  I believe most people can relate to this thought and feeling.  Good job!  

Mags

The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else!

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04
Posts 212

3 posted 2001-08-15 08:37 AM


let me know what it's like to be
more than just forgotten.


The emotion quickly cries out in your words, Very good!!

Willie

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