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LadyPeach1
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0 posted 2001-08-10 12:24 PM



            Running faster and faster,
               escaping the night,
  I lift my feet off the ground and take my flight
        Flying and Soaring into the light,
    Gliding past the sun that shines so bright,
       Flowing and Soaring just like a kite,
          I fly and soar into the light.



[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (edited 08-10-2001).]

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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-08-10 07:40 PM


I like this--i like how ever last word rhymes   great work LOVE ELMO <3
Ethan Halo
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on the roof again
2 posted 2001-08-11 01:48 AM


grasping the light does feel good doesn't it?
great write. made my insides smile  

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

WRBreezin
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3 posted 2001-08-11 08:46 AM



This seems more precious than dark, nonetheless it's most enjoyable!

Willie

LadyPeach1
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4 posted 2001-08-12 01:17 AM


Thank you everyone for your support and thanks for all the replys.  this one was short, but it had a pretty powerful message.
LadyPeach1

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