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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-07-29 09:07 PM


Alone with the Moon

Yes of course I wanted to make love to you.
And I surely would have if you wanted me to.

I didn't realize our relationship would end so fast.
It was my hope that I could find a love that would last.

Surely you know that I would never use you.
It was not my intention to so quickly lose you.

So now I know the fate of one that falls in love too soon
as I spend my evenings in agony all alone with the moon.

Jameslee@July29,2001



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Jessica
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1 posted 2001-07-29 09:11 PM


Wonderful James ~ Exellent decription of a lost love here... I've been there... Just keep your head up and know that there IS some special someone out there just for you.  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-07-29 11:40 PM


Poignant...but there will be nights when the memories get you through. As a moon "devotee", I particularly enjoyed this glance into your thoughts. I particulary like the symbolism of the moon...she waxes and wanes and reigns in glory again...just like us!  
Dark Kisses
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3 posted 2001-07-29 11:57 PM


Oh wow! I could just feel the sadness in this poem!   A job very well done here!

                              


                                 Mags

Hellseyes
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4 posted 2001-07-30 12:07 PM


hey this is da alkflk.../Drew/
good write..

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-07-31 12:46 PM


enjoyed reading, James...

~Tier

helen smith
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6 posted 2001-07-31 01:37 AM


just perfect  James
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