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Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-07-25 08:19 PM

a beauty that is untouchable
my lustful thoughts out of control
no situation could change this
sensual thoughts cloud my mind
she invades my dreams
her name is unspeakable
and this love must never be
the chances present themself more
her life is turning to shambles
i must not comfort her as my heart feels
i'm so in love, so deep in love
kissing, touching, holding each other tight
simple day dreams in my life
deep inside i wish she could see
this love so true
a love that will go unnurtured
she will always be the one in my life
forever an untouchable love

[This message has been edited by Hellseyes (edited 07-25-2001).]

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-25 08:22 PM

You strike again I see??? Well I won't stop ya' I'll just say that this shows what wanting something really means... that is when you can't touch it. Great job man, keep it up and I'll be looking for more. /Nick/

Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

2 posted 2001-07-26 11:19 AM

Untouchable love... sad thing really, but it seems to be in most of our lives. good write.
/Dustin/

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2001-07-27 08:52 PM

I really liked this one--I've definatly been there b4 & know what u r feeling--trust me though it gets better

LOVE ELMO <3

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2001-07-28 03:36 AM

Definately been there before ~ Keep your head up!!

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

5 posted 2001-07-29 03:40 AM

Wow, that is a sad poem. Don't you hate when you want something you know you can't have?
that sucks! But there is no sense in reaching out for something you can't touch.
LadyPeach1

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-07-30 04:14 PM

Yeah there's a certain waitress in Pearl City that I really like and she's married...or should I say untouchable..so this is life...James

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-07-31 12:45 PM

Well done...

~Tier

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