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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I don't know you I thought I did I'd danced your shadow in a rosy hue of mystic happiness I had my ears tickled with the sweetness of your words Tolerance, mistaken for interest pity, mistaken for love the blame, is mine alone so, I embrace it with one important lesson learned... never hand one the tools to kill me again... -R.T. 5/99 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
someone once told me that love is being able to hand the one you love a knife and then walk away. . . this illustrates that perfectly... . excellent Tier. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I would title this 'Smarter Now'...I hope you aren't jaded by the experience. This is a marvelous poem! |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Your words cut as sharp as any knife, Tiers. Excellent work.  "I know that I am like the rain. There but for the grace of you go I." |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sven, no truer words have been spoken! Thank you for your kind comments! *smiles* Poet De Vine, Catchy title, I will consider it. However, I really did feel Jaded at the time that I wrote this poem. I honestly didn't think I could trust anyone again. Thanks for commenting, I truly appreciate it. Coyote, I don't think the person about whom these words were written has ever laid eyes upon it. Thank you for commenting. *smiles* -Tier |
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Captivating1 Junior Member
since 2001-06-07
Posts 15Houston, TX |
It sounded as though you wrote this with tears in your eyes, pain in your heart and anger in your spirit...I can tell because I was able to feel all of those emotions as I read it. I hope all is well now... -Captivating1 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
your usual intensity and form... love your style dear friend |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, My Captain... *smiles* ~Tier |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Something to think about...but not always so easy to perform...temptation is a strong potion...James |
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