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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-03-05 06:31 PM




This brown eyed girl
With the long brown hair
Plays the part of an angel
Displaying a halo of gold
To everyone's eyes, she is a
Beautiful creature
But what they don't see
Is the Devil benealth her
She locks away her secretes
Never to be told
Always masking a smile
Always looking like a precious
Stone
Her Angelic features, are intimidating to most
They do not bother to get near
Her, they don't bother to know her
Soul
She is a sad, sad child
With many tears to shed
She tucks them benealth her wings
Hiding them from the world



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-03-05 07:10 PM


In that case many of us are indeed angels!
She should find someone a friend who does understand and can sympathesize and help her mend. We all need that special friend, a kindred spirit, who doesn't even need to be a life partner, just that special someone male or female who can help ease the burden when needed.
Lovely melancholy piece TM just watch the spelling
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Jeremy Redinger
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 46

2 posted 2001-03-06 08:32 PM


Pain, hurt, sadness... Fear. It takes a lot of strength to hide that way, only because it digs and eats its way at you, that if you were not strong you would be eaten alive by it.

I want to hug the girl, and kiss her cheek, I want to love her and know her and be there for her. I want to take the sadness from her heart and replace it with joy and happiness.


Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
3 posted 2001-03-06 08:43 PM


Always looking like a precious
Stone
Her Angelic features, are intimidating to most
They do not bother to get near
Her, they don't bother to know her
Soul
**************
I loved this part. It was sad, and beautyfully well written. I like your way of writing

~Broken~


Oh God! Why the angels fall first?

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