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Maybe somehow in the someday |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods 
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MAYBE SOMEHOW IN THE SOMEDAY Hello! Can you see me through your mirror I'm in here on the inside But you can't see me, can you It's dark here And I know that you can't hear me As even you were trying But I'm crying anyway I know I know that you could like me And I know that you could love me If there was nothing left to blame But I'm here I'm stuck here on the inside And you're living on the outside So you would never understand What it is like Living on the inside, Locked within your own head With eyes that are just peep-holes To the glorious outside world But maybe Somehow in the someday You'll sense me from the outside And break your way inside Or maybe Maybe even someday Maybe even somehow I'll find my own way out And maybe We'll find eachother somehow And be alone together And I'll get to hold the you I'd like to love --------------------- "The story of love is quick as the wink of an eye The story of love is hello and goodbye, We meet again" J.H (RIP) [This message has been edited by Broken (edited 03-04-2001).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I felt the devistation in this one. Hope you are ok? You can email anytime if you need to talk... *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I have to say the words touching and wistful came to mind on this one.. wishes are hard sometimes I think  K |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Wonderful write! Good imagery and emotions throughout the entire piece. Enjoyed very much. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
I know how it feels to be locked away on the inside, this was beautiful yet sad..... Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wow, I caught another one. I love the way you think, I truly do. There's just something about it that's....intriguing.  I hope you find what you're searching for. I know that you will someday, but I hope it's soon. I know it's so hard to keep waiting. and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness |
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