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Dark Poetry #3

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JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

0 posted 2001-03-04 06:26 AM

Empty Peace

Why?
It is not I,
In the mirror.
Who’s eyes?

Pain.
Layered so deep.
Sad reflection.
How long?

Gone.
Memories fade,
Of dreams, of love.
What price?

Paid.
Flayed from my soul.
Nothing remains.
Time now,

To Sleep.

John D LeClare

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-03-04 04:00 PM

John,
Interesting write, I hope about the sleep of the just where you wake refreshed.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

2 posted 2001-03-06 03:22 PM

Nice one. It leaves alot up to the reader to sort out, I like that, makes me think.

~Broken~

Oh God! Why the angels fall first?

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

3 posted 2001-03-06 03:30 PM

A very good piece. Strong and thoughtful. Enjoyed the read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

4 posted 2001-03-06 06:47 PM

Thanks for the comments! I always feel better after I write. Does this work the same way for anyone else?

John

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