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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-04 11:40 PM




This is my life
I take it as it comes
Lonely and scared
Not knowing where to run
Breezing through the motions
Of lifes many tasks
Where has time gone?
When will this saddnes end?
Here i sit, now turning 27
Another year older
Still feeling the madness
Looking back at pictures
Of many years past
The fun that i had
All the things that i did
And all the visions of my beautiful dreams
Will my life change?
By this time next year
Or will i be sitting in the same
Place
Still shedding tears





I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

© Copyright 2001 Danyel L. Azar - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2001-02-05 12:41 PM


Awwwwwwww!  This was depressing.  Here I am about to turn 30 (eck!) in April and I thought that was sad! lol
Anyways ...... dont worry about it.  Just put some effort into things and your life can change.  Sitting around shedding tears can only make things worse! (trust me, I know!!) Take it one day at a time and dont rush it.  It'll come when it is suppose to.  If ya ever need to chat, page me! I am a good listener!  

*Handing you a tissue*
Take care,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-02-05 01:15 AM


And here sits she who is soon to be 26. Oh, I do so understand.

Hugs,

K

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

3 posted 2001-02-05 02:06 AM


Temptress*Moon

Look for "Another 27"

Krawdad

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2001-02-05 04:11 AM


Temptress Moon,
it's no consolation for growing older but have a HuG anyway.
good poem
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
5 posted 2001-02-05 06:22 AM


Awww!*S* Thanks all, for replying with your kind words....*S*much appreciated...
Hugs...Temptress*Moon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

wandering
Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92

6 posted 2001-02-05 09:16 PM


each step in life we take brings new adventures, each breath revitalizes us, each memory, happy or sad, gives us hope, each day we get through is a gift to earn another.enjoy each day, age is all in the mind. even through all the sadness, if you look around, you can see beauty in all of creation. enjoy it. its your to cherish.

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2001-02-17 11:56 PM


i cant say i know what your tears are about..but i hope you find your happiness before this time next year..

and..."27" is just a number...i hope you realize that...its whats inside that makes all the difference..and when you reach "28" next year..i hope you can hold your head up and say, wow..another year to feel the sun..another year to look for rainbows in the rain..another year to dream, and live, and wonder about what the year will hold for me....

happy 27 to you...

hugs, g


"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2001-02-18 07:56 PM


There are not many consolations in growing older, to this we all agree. I'm 33 myself, there is one good thing about ageing, you do acquire heaps more wisdom along the way
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
9 posted 2001-02-21 02:49 PM


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Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
10 posted 2001-02-22 11:44 AM




Hm ... Can't say i understand what it is like to feel like i am 'aging' ... well maybe not yet ...
But i do feel that time is just slipping away so fast ...
Anyway, i really enjoy this read.


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