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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-02-19 03:25 AM

Pending my wants, I control my desire,
But the spook from the devil causes a burst of fire,
My wants are surfacing like a hero admire,
Knowing that he has found the right buyer,
Filling my wants signals my hire,
How did I ever become such a great liar?

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

1 posted 2001-02-19 01:54 PM

interesting write, I wasn't prepared for that final line. that's great! I wonder too, about how much people step back and look at themselves and ask that question. Enjoyed the read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

2 posted 2001-02-19 04:55 PM

I'm not sure what to say to this, except that it strikes a familiar chord. I was never a great liar, just so so. Good work.

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

3 posted 2001-02-20 08:08 PM

hmmm...you sound like someone i might know
heh heh

nice poem!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-02-21 03:28 AM

Xeonox,
Baron Munchausen would be proud, you tell stories so well
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

5 posted 2001-02-21 02:41 PM

Nice. i liked this and i am not sure why, maybe some part of mecan identify, but regardless i enjoyed reading your work.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

6 posted 2001-02-21 03:34 PM

Thank you for the reponse my friends.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-02-21 05:50 PM

Genetics?

haha......wonderful job here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

8 posted 2001-02-22 11:52 AM

Gee ... i'm a terrible liar myself ... You ought to give me some pointers soon ...
Hahaha ... kidding.

Interesting work though.

[This message has been edited by Verve (edited 02-22-2001).]

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