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He
Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41


0 posted 2001-01-19 08:21 PM


still
  
   She

only she
speaks in heart

language sadly obscure
understood by two
   now

a lexicon
  turned litany
of all
  that is

       rising

in time
  together

two hands
   one love
  clasp
tightly

the overture enjoined

a million melodies
    smile
stitched in rythms
loom of absolution

gasp ye fates
  in purest envy
    your needle knows
       us
it will not obey
  your withered
    fingers

    tremble

in each crucibled moment
    we forge
      love
tempered with life
     alloyed
   with dreams

      belief

  passions fire
       unquenchable
      flame
     burns
ignites night

      depths

become stairways
telamons
   caryatids
     embrace
       whitest
         marble

words made stone
   the home
      sculpted

      together

hammer of the sky
   holds the precise
      honed chiseled
        
     gently

feeling truth
   given over
     become

the tools
   of light
    
fusion as the sun
   inseparable

  becomes them
    defines them

He rends the clouds
She parts the waves
      
    all binding

earthbound
   dreamborn
  yesterday
      tomorrow

joining

      eternity
         breathe
             lifes
                depths

       become
             all

            todays

           beginning

              now



      


[This message has been edited by He (edited 01-20-2001).]

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WinterTalon
Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA
1 posted 2001-01-19 10:40 PM


I'll never understand how you can do that...  It honestly is a mystery to me how you can put images in my head without my knowledge...

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~


Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
2 posted 2001-01-20 01:39 AM




Awesome ... Simply beautiful.  


Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2001-01-20 07:17 PM


Well...

do I get away with a wordless on this too?

Your voice is a wave...I think I'm still immersed...

K

He
Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41

4 posted 2001-01-21 12:59 PM


PE and Verve- Many thanks for the kind words.

If I am able to conjure image or emotion it is She who compels all that I am.

For She
is
     truly
inspiration's illumination

every epiphany
sings from the heart

the music of the sun

...................
Now you Love
your
wordless
speaks
more than all words
aspirations

so clear
   precious one

   your gift

the depths
     of knowing


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

5 posted 2001-01-22 05:51 AM


*gulp*  

Tremendous!  

Loved it!  Wow... I'm speechless.

~ Tara ~


may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 2001-01-25 04:00 AM


five  



[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 01-25-2001).]

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