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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
So i was drunk when i frist wrote this, but now i am not and i editied it a little You were always there to hold my hand, Tell me that it would all be ok, You are the one who always meant something, In my heart in my soul, you spoke to me, My time has come and now i want to thank you, I need to tell you what you are to me, The last thing i want you to know, Is that you are special and i love you,' This isnt something that comes easy, Or something that i want to say, I need to tell you though because it is important, In the end we will be together, Mind body and soul i want to be whole, You are the one who is different, The one who matters most, You are my angel and my one true love, In the end i want you to know that i love you, After everything is done, After my time here is done, You will be the voice that echos for eternity, My angel will be waiting for me, And when i see his heavenly face, It will look just like you, My ocean angel and my earth angel, So in these last moments i want to tell you, Never forget me always remember the way we were, How you could melt my heart with just one look, And how you meant everything to me Matt, i love you more than words could ever say, Know that, remember that, Love me how i have always loved you, and never forget you are my angel so as said before i am drunk so forgive typos and stuff, i am seeing double, i love my boyfriend and suicide has been on my mind l8ly because i dont want this life. if i were to kill myself or if i were on the edge of death this is what i would say to him in a note or poem. [This message has been edited by Ginners (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
HUGS(((((((((Gin))))))))) HUGS. Gin with a person that can write like this even when drunk is a person so full of life, You do have a talent that can rise far more than most. Expression on paper (so to speak) is so hard to most, but hell kid you can even do it when drunk, haha I tried it once here and it just turned out to be a slobber fest. haha. Gin just look to the simple things for pleasure in life and don't make it harder than it is. Your boyfriend is a lucky man, and you kid have a great talent. Well that's all from an old man. haha Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Joel- thank you so much for your kind words and support, i guess it isnt that bad for being drunk, but as always, it could use some work, but thank you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful words you have expressed...James |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
what talent. geez...i have problems writing straight alot of the time...ha, but such a gloomy poem. I don't mean to be rude, but i'd like to share a little of my limited knowledge. I'm only 17, but a few years ago i was feelin the suicide thing too, and an old man, whom i looked up to for advice gave me some of the best advice, he told me " Suicide is a permanent solution to temporary problems" and i myself firmly believe that happier days come along for everyone  beautiful writing skills, great flow of words and images...take care " How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
James- thank you for your kind words Thy- thank you for your advice and your words. But i have heard everything and this isnt something that will go away and it has nothing to with happier days. |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
While any words I write are of such minute help, I know, rest assured and reminder yourself Tmorrow will come. And none knows what tomorrow may bring.Perhaps the wish of your heart, perhaps a change. I can say from experience, life can turn on a heartbeat.And in the most profound ways. Believing in possibilties and one's direction can often get one through. Although the pain of heart is he most devestating of all. It can get better. Not much help now I know. Wish you well. |
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