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Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-05-22 08:22 AM

You have no idea as to what I do,
when we get off of the phone.
If I've got someone else to talk to,
or if I was left all alone.

You worry about me sometimes,
but I always say I'm okay,
so you say you'll call tomorrow,
or maybe the next day.

More than anything in the world,
I want things to work with you,
because you understand me,
and everything I do.

You always say the right things,
and make me love you more,
and when the time comes to say goodbye,
it's you that I adore.

You seem to care about me,
as much as I care about you,
so let me know if you love me,
because I love you too.

More than anything,
I want this to be something,
I want this to work out,
more than anyything.

I know, this is weird, but forgive me,

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-05-22 08:25 AM

Great Job Allysa, a wonderful read

Zu

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

2 posted 2001-05-22 08:29 AM

thanks Zu. I appreciate it. I have to go to school in less than five minutes!!!!!!! UGG!!!!

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-05-22 08:35 AM

I really liked this piece, so honest, and raw....but very good. I hope you get what you're in need of.

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-05-22 09:56 AM

Pure emotions in this piece. I liked it.

~*Nikki*~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-05-22 11:30 AM

I liked this

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-22 07:57 PM

Very well done here! I enjoyed it. You didn't beat around the bush in this one. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

7 posted 2001-05-22 08:05 PM

aw...this is such a cute poem..( wrong word i know...)..i enjoyed this for its honesty...sometimes when you're at that stage in a friendship...things like love seem almost forbbiden....bite the bullet allysa..ASK HIM OUT!!
nice poem i enjoyed the read thank you much!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-05-23 02:29 AM

well done...this poem was great...i enjoyed this piece a lot....thanks for the read allysa...and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

9 posted 2001-05-23 03:23 AM

wow kool meaning in this poem! i likes!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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