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Ricky
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since 2001-02-25
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West Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-03-03 01:46 PM


I have a girlfriend and she's really great to me,
But how come when we're not around we're never happy,
We always argue when we talk on the phone,
But it's the exact opposite when we are alone,

I got so tired of it I did something stupid,
But we're cool now and I can't tell her what I did,
I wish things coudl always be happy,
But why is it that she is always annoying,

It's not nice to say but I don't care,
She made me mad and took a mighty dare,
She told me she hates me and said she was kidding,
Hun, you can't joke around, this is our relation you're bidding,

So what do I do now,
All I can do is frown,
What is so wrong with me,
I can never make anyone happy.
Sucks to be me.



Ricky

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2001-03-03 02:27 PM


C'mon dude, it doesn't suck to be you ALWAYS. I am sure you make people happy, you know it. Sometimes relationships can go on the rocks, the trick is to make sure you think before opening that mouth of yours. People can say some pretty horrible things for the sake of hurting their significant other. Anyway, next time......just make sure the both of you think.

go to:
www.msn.com

i heard there was a article on how to ARGUE with your loved one FAIRLY.
So yea........if it's not there, blame my significant other.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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2 posted 2001-03-03 11:06 PM


"I got so tired of it I did something stupid,
But we're cool now and I can't tell her what I did"

A healthy relationship is when both sides are being honest with each other. I suggest you start being more open to her and tell her.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Ricky
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 28
West Virginia, USA
3 posted 2001-03-04 02:10 AM


You guys just don't understand my relationship stuff.

If she can't be honest to me I can't be honest to her. And she's not.

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-03-04 02:53 AM


Ooh man.... I know the feeling.
Honesty is key in a relationship. I personally just lost someone very important to me because I ~admitted~ a lie.
Funny how when we get brave, we get punished.
So try to see it her way. Lies are in the past, and you should move into the future.
Just make sure she realizes how hard this is on you.
Best of luck.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan



[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-04-2001).]

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