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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-03-02 04:35 PM


Mom-

I just wanted to thank you,
For putting up with me for 18 years.

Sometimes I feel like I’ve taken you for granted,
And makes me hurt inside, Mom, it makes me wanna cry.

I may be 18 now, all grown up,
But I still need you.

I’m still a kid inside,
And now I’m hurt again.

This tyme its not a cut or scrape,
Its much more, a broken heart.

My friends have tried to help,
But I need your help the most.

I try to be strong around you,
And not to let the tears fall.

Mom, I just wanted you to know . . .



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1 posted 2001-03-02 05:51 PM


Very nice post, nice tribute to an important figure in everyone's life. i dunno what'd i do w/o my mom. she cards my ass everywhere! LOL nice job

~Valerie~

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

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2 posted 2001-03-02 10:29 PM


I'm glad that you know that your mom is always gonna be there for you
hope things get better Tamma

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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3 posted 2001-03-03 12:56 PM


It's sweet to see that you have a bond this big with your mother. I have the same kind with mine.......she's my best friend.
Anyhow, nicely done.



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4 posted 2001-03-03 09:15 AM


Nice one here Tamma...Mommy's are pretty cool. Good luck with everything.
~Carly

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5 posted 2001-03-04 02:30 AM


Very sweet. And nicely done.
~Allan

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6 posted 2001-03-05 01:46 PM


library addition...
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