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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-02-28 04:23 PM

I cried as you walked away,
I couldn’t believe it was really over.

You turned back once,
And saw my tears.

It looked like you wanted to cry,
And you quickly turned away.

Everyone tried to comfort me,
But I just wanted you.

I stood there watching you walk away,
Knowing I could do nothing.

I prayed that you would come back,
And tell me it was a mistake.

My tears began to hit the ground,
And form a puddle at my feet.

You called me when I got home,
Said there was a chance for love again.

I continued to cry,
You said it hurt you to see it.

Earlier, I was holding your hand,
You held mine for a while, too.

But then you pushed it away,
And I cried even harder.

I don’t know what to think,
All I wanna do is cry.

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Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2001-02-28 05:13 PM

So cry. Cry until you've found yourself again, and only then will you be able to mend what has been broken. It's going to turn out all right. Don't lose hope. We're all here for you, with advice or cyber-hugs...*hug*
~Carly

"Nature is not only all that is visible to the eye--it also includes the inner pictures of the soul." ~Edvard Munch

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2001-02-28 08:14 PM

Yes, let your tears come, that can help. I think your poem captured this feeling extremly well. I hope you make it through this situation, keep communicating and see how things go. I'm sure everyone else will give better support then I can, but know that all of us are here for you.

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-28 08:26 PM

Tamma it's going to be ok. I think it was quite immature for him to just up and leave you for that reason. He should converse with you about it and see if there is anyway to solve the problem rather than to just OUT OF NOWHERE leave you. He'll come back because there was no closure to the breakup...He did it in a rash way....
Good luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2001-03-01 12:28 PM

hmm i agree with dopes... very sad poem, i do hope all works out in the end for you, cheer up!

JR

When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

Ricky
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 28
West Virginia, USA

5 posted 2001-03-01 03:46 PM

I'm sorry Tamma. I'm always here for you. I'm just a phone call away.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-03-01 05:49 PM

keep your head up tamma...I think he'll be back
if he wanted everything to really be over, he wouldnt have called you again
hang in there

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

7 posted 2001-03-02 10:33 AM

I agree with acire, if he didn't have those feelings anymore, then he probably wouldn't have bothered calling, at least so soon. It will come back,when it happens this way it almost always does. Good luck and keep ya' head up.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

8 posted 2001-03-03 08:26 AM

*hug* I'm a big fan of the hug. Just find happiness in the fact that you've changed people's lives enough for them to care about you. And even some (myself included) are just concerned even though we don't hardly know you.

Peace and Happiness
Bryan

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

9 posted 2001-03-03 01:07 PM

wow~ the confusion of love. expressed very well in this poem. keep it up and smile

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

10 posted 2001-03-04 02:32 AM

This has a great theme to it.
Sorrow makes for some wonderful poetry. Keep writing, hon.
And best of luck to you. You always know where to find me.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

IsGona
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since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

11 posted 2001-03-04 03:07 PM

I'm terribly sorry Tamma. Break ups are hard enough, let alone unexpected ones that seem to have no reason or ryhme. I wish you the best
Jason

Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

12 posted 2001-03-05 01:49 PM

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