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jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2001-03-01 12:51 PM

NOTE: 'Bout the situation. Ughhhh

'Mascara Lynne'

Mascara eyes, an inky look,
Shedding blackish hued tears
Maybe a finger, or tissue will due,
To wipe away your fears

Rest your head upon my thigh,
Cry until your eyes are dry
Look into my soul so deep,
Weep a tear, don’t ask me why

Your sunny strands tangle me,
And sweet fingers feather skin
Forget your dreaded issues,
Just love me so, my Lynne

To Lynne,
Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-01 06:36 AM

A wonderful message of unconditional love and support ... nice cadence and rhyme Jeremy!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-03-01 02:26 PM

I surely hope your GF gets well and is ok.
Very unfortunate thing that has happened.
Great poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-03-01 05:35 PM

And they say guys don't show they're feelings.
You're her angel JD

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

DreadedLiver
Member

since 2001-01-23

Posts 56
Alter, Ego

4 posted 2001-03-01 06:52 PM

thanks u 3...
means a lot to hear people care even tho they dont even know us.. thats so awesome
plus this poem sucks

JR

"zzzIzzzAMzzzJEREMYDRAULzzz"

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

5 posted 2001-03-01 08:29 PM

Wow this is really great. I'm so pathetic, I think this is really sweet, lol. Good luck, I hope things get better...
Bel

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2001-03-02 06:33 PM

I love your critique messege

I don't think this poem sucks, you've got it all wrong. Thank you for sharing this, it does say a lot.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" Unknown
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." Unkno

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