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Why do we love?
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Why do we love? |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
Love lasts a second but can feel like a lifetime it will wrap you up and squeeze you hard Whaen it is through with you you will never be the same Love is a complicated yet beautiful delicate thing When you haver love nothing else matters yet when you are falling the hardest part of it all is that you know eventually you wll hit the bottom hard love hurts thats the truth so why do we love? Is it to know for ourselves that we have feelings? or is an uncontrollable thing? When you love someone noone else matters Friends and Family get pushed aside so why do we do it? Why do we love? < !signature--> Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you. [This message has been edited by liqwidnik (edited 01-31-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hmm... why do we love? Very good question. I think that we love because we all, deep in our hearts, long for that one kindred spirit with whom to share our lives... and when this person is found, they become the most wonderful and amazing thing imaginable. It really gets in the way though, it hurts, but hey that's just love. I wouldn't label it a "good" emotion as i would an "extreme" emotion. It can be the most incredibly wonderful or horridly painful thing on earth. Oops... i'm ranting. Just goes to show you got me thinking! Heh... thanks for the read. Very beautifully crafted poem. -Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I've given my lecture hundreds of times on how love can never be bad. Love= 100% good If you'd like for me to explain yet another time, then ask........but I wouldn't wanna bore you all. nice poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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MidnightMaverick Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 35Duluth, MN, USA |
Love hurts. I agree. Been there many 'a time. I like this poem very much. Keep up the good work. -Maverick |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was a great poem. love rox when it is true. regina when i wish, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
why do we love? good question i think we love because deep inside we are love email me if you want my long explanation to this :> I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR [This message has been edited by acire (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
it was a good poem, but i dont agree that love hurts. coz if its hurting it can't be real love! the love i have with my boy is the most incredible feeling i've ever felt - it definatly doesn't hurt! keep writing  Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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